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my poem..?
October 11th, 2009 Posted by: admin
Inspiration is always around me,
sometimes there’s difficulty finding it,
and sometimes thoughts flood my mind,
i soak it all in as i sit.
sometimes there’s difficulty finding it,
and sometimes thoughts flood my mind,
i soak it all in as i sit.
ocassionally I write thoughts down,
or I’ll lock them in my head,
or they’re lead to my heart,
my satisfaction being fed.
a few thoughts are lost,
a few often replaced,
only my strong thoughts,
get truly faced.
What did you think?
(No mean comments please.)(Constructive critisism welcomed)
By: mcjonas
October 13th, 2009 at 01:29
“get truly faced” could be worder a little better, but otherwise, perfect!
ps. it’s “They are led”, not “They’re lead”
January 17th, 2010 at 14:41
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